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You have shown a lot of detail in your work which will get you a lot of marks such as information which has been set.
ReplyDeleteYou could have organised you work by labelling what is what i.e brainstorm, moodboard and so on.
Great Work Haseeb.
I like your idea of depression within teenagers. I feel as though you have thought carefully about what your articles going to be about.
ReplyDeleteI also like how you have researched statistics about your ideas.
From Desiree
The idea which you have which is depression in teens,you have gone into a lot detail ,overall it is a really good idea which you have written in alot of detail
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