Feedback for group short story and poster

Group short story/poster feedback

•  Added an vignette at the beginning of the shot
• The sound effects for the laugh and the footsteps
• Music should have been added to it
• The silence added suspense
• Good title – Bloodlust
  Poster:
• Cant see the writing at the bottom
• Use of the colour of red connoting the genre
• Strapline used
• Font needs to be brighter